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Yoshiko Mikazuki

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Prayer by @yoshiko (Yoshiko Mikazuki)

Eh... not that bad I suppose. I was hoping it would come out better. The circles at her feet are supposed to be water ripples. I like the coloring job, and the wings are pretty good. What it really needs though, is a background, which unfortunately I am horrible at. The vibrant colors of her skirt and hair contrast too much with the white background. Let's see... Hannakin will yell at me about the hands, Hoshi will be me about the hair and wings, and I refuse to let Oni beat me about the jawline, because I actually tried to make it in porportion this time. ^^;; Sorry.. I just washed dishes for an hour and a half. I'm grumpy. ^^;;

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23y19d ago
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