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Julie Miyamoto

SGP Presents: a comic becoming a bad habit
SGP Presents: a comic becoming a bad habit by @Minzoku (Julie Miyamoto)

I should really have a better name for these, but I didn't plan to actually continue the series... so.

The two characters debuting in this comic are Scatter and Johnathan, and neither are Cognitive/Emotive but from the original staff of SGP when I had first thought of making a regular comic for them. [This fell through SO BAD.] This is significant because it breaks their scale: Hysteria should only be between 2-6", but Scatter and Johnathan are about 1.5-2' tall. This is mostly due to Hysteria becoming an accidental author avatar and scale-breaking being an unfortunate concession to being able to interact with other characters more easily.

Scatter's line is a non-sequitur because 1. I thought of a good punchline involving the original dialogue and I hate to reuse lines and lessen the impact, and 2. that's the way he is. (Hysteria IS the boss, incidentally.)

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