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How Jack destroyed the Earth part 1 0f 2
How Jack destroyed the Earth part 1 0f 2 by @colibill (Colin Billington)

This is another one of my short stories which is 2 pages long. Jack isnt the brightest of people and he showed it when he accidently destroyed the World.

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Furry / Anthropomorphic
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Teen (L)
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