@Panthra
Rei Easthope

Final Straw
Final Straw by @Panthra (Rei Easthope)

This could be the very minute I'm aware i'm alive All these places feel like home

With a name i'd never chosen I can make my first steps As a child of 25

This is the straw, final straw in the Roof of my mouth as I lie to you Just because i'm sorry doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it at the time.

You're the only thing that I love Scares me more every day On my knees I think clearer

Goodness knows I saw it coming Or at least i'll claim I did But in truth i'm lost for words

What have I done? It's too late for that What have I become? Truth is nothing yet A simple mistake starts the hardest time I promise i'll do anything you ask, this time. Snow Patrol - Chocolate

Panthra cannot do rain... live with it...

That there is Human Kieth, he's much better looking than that normally, I just did him real ugly >.<

I'm sure all this means something... but I don't know what. looks at lyrics Something to do with Orion maybe.

... I've just realised, his eyes are the wrong colour >.<

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