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Smokey Sin
Smokey Sin by @leelee (Lee Lee)

My freaky dudette friend, Amy Tan. She smokes and I get on her case about it all the time. People are alowed to kill themselves if they want by smoking, but it really makes me angry when they have disreguard to the people around them. I'm allergic to cigarrette smoke, so I think it's rude for people to smoke around me. The scanner cut off Amy's hand, so you can't see where I have her holding her 'smoke' and you also can't see the poem I wrote for this pic.

~Smokey Sin~

Blue peace fills the air. The day falls down cold. In the rush of the city, angels scream sweetly. Hurting the pale breeze, like a dry, whipping wine.

Pink organs burn with breath. The SIN is thick. It flows like a stream, but hot like fire, swirling towards hell.

Showering down in bullets, stabbing your skin, and piercing your soul. Blue, sad and hard. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Lee Lee

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