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Rai Quee?

April 9th, 1999
April 9th, 1999 by @raiquee (Rai Quee?)

When i woke up the rain was pourin' down There were people standin' all around Something warm, flooded through my eyes But somehow i found my baby that night I lifted her head she looked at me and said "Hold me darlin' just a little while" I held her close, i kissed her our last kiss I found my love that i knew i had missed And now shes gone even though i hold her tight I lost my love... my life... that night...

~Dedicated to a very close friend that commited suicide 3 years ago...happy anniversary Cassie. I love you~

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