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Akiva Papa

Wenn ich sterbe
Wenn ich sterbe by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Wenn ich sterben würde
könnte ich dein Licht sein
Wenn ich sterben würde
dürfte ich dich lieben
Wenn ich sterben würde
würden wir leben

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