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Tasume, Evil Leader of Derandin (dark door in my rps)
Tasume, Evil Leader of Derandin (dark door in my rps) by @Kat_Reverie (Kat Reverie)

' She looked at the evil being before her, heart pierced, wings severed, right eye removed, cuts aon many areas of her body of wich depth was by all means more than an inch, yet the vile creature still stood, how? why? when will it fall? Verily knew not, all she knew was Tasume was her enemy. " Die vile beast! You have no right to be here! This is a sacred place!" Verily yelled summoning the star to the palm of her hand. "Thou hast no right to be here more than I, your heart is more wicked than mine! Your soul and powers are as the same, you are more vile than I!" Tasume said with glee.

"No, i am not Tasume Treganar of Deradin, yur are right that my heart, mind, and powers are more tainted,,, But my soul is pure!" Verily yelled raising her mother's glaive in her right hand and the star in the left, the powers of the two resinated. "Tasume! You perish here!!" Verily yelled releaseing the powers from the two items of power. "And so do I." she whispered as the power engulfed her aswell. the glaive was destroyed and it's powers scattered, the star broke apart and there it shattered.'

he he, from the last book of my 5-7 book series, i'm still writeing book one! Lol. Artwork © Copyright 2003 Kat Reverie

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