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Christine Frost

Is something the matter?
Is something the matter? by @Tana_chan (Christine Frost)

Korosu and Seraphina standing alone together and having a private conversation outside on the cliffs outside of Haven.


Angry, confused, lonely and frustrated, Korosu abandoned the healing pool. He rushed to the cliff tops bordering the vampire city and stood peering silently over the edge.

Sera, having witnessed his rushed flight hurried after him, "I wish you'd tell me what's wrong... You seem upset." Sera said softly, placing a hand on Koro's shoulder. "I worry about you when you turn your back on everyone like this, without even a word as to why."

"It doesn't matter why I'm upset, because nothing I say or do will ever change the outcome of our fate." Koro said a hard edge to his voice as he glanced over his shoulder at her.

"You'll never be free and I'll always be alone..."

Korosu © Peta Fenton Seraphina Astrid © 2003-2005 Christine Frost

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