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Akiva Papa

braune stimme
braune stimme by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Braune Stimme Sing mir ein Lied
Trag mich davon
Schließe mich ein
in dein Nichts

Was niemals Einheit war
war Schein und Hohn
und Illusion
und ist der Ton
der jetzt erstirbt
Sing mir ein Lied
Zum Abschied

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Akiva Papa

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Rating:
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