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Amanda Lien

angelic layer doujinshi - pg 4
angelic layer doujinshi - pg 4 by @alienfirst (Amanda Lien)

Page four of the doujinshi. I know that the perspecive is royally screwed up in the first two panels, so please don´t critque me on those >_< I suck at perspective and architecture, and this just proves the point.

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