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Cristin VanCleave

Polly's Tree
Polly's Tree by @crisvan2 (Cristin VanCleave)

A dream tree, Polly's tree: a thicket of sticks, each speckled twig ending in a thin-paned leaf unlike any other on it or in a ghost flower flat as paper and of a color vaporish as frost-breath, more finical than and silk fan the Chinese ladies use to stir robin's egg air. The silver- haired seed of the milkweed comes to roost there, frail as the halo rayed round a candle flame, a will-o'-the-wisp nimbus, or puff of cloud-stuff, tipping her queer candelabrum. Paley lit by snuff-ruffed dandelions, white daisy wheels and a tiger-faced pansy, it glows. O it's no family tree, Polly's tree, nor a tree of heaven, though it marry quartz-flake, feather and rose. It sprang from her pillow whole as a cobweb, ribbed like a hand, a dream tree. Polly's tree wears a valentine arc of tear-pearled bleeding hearts on its sleeve and, crowning it, one blue larkspur star.

That poem, "Polly's Tree", was by the late Sylvia Plath; one of the most influential authors to me. This poem inspired me to do a late night drawing of my own dream tree, with colored pencils and a bit of chalk here and there. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Cristin VanCleave

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