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Page 3, the end!!! finally.
Page 3, the end!!! finally. by @dyani (Carli Joy)

Hahaha, you thought I'd NEVER finish didn't you?!?! Well I did. Don't know WHY... but I did. Joe informed me, cheerfully, that it's the dumbest thing he's ever seen, then threw the paper at me, and walked off yelling in a scary monotone. I wasn't really sure what to do with myself after such a compliment. :D Actually the art is way better on this than the other two pages, I think, even though I cannot draw poor Milly and THE ENDING STINKS!!! WHOOOOO!!! Plus, it's short. Hahaha. I'm gonna shut up now. Vash is a LOSER!!! You shouldn't need a script for this one as it is all large and stuff. I hate the last panel, I hate it, DARN THAT FLOWER!!!!!

Joe: imitates Vash-face "WOO-HOO!!"

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