@Minzoku
Julie Miyamoto

MLCM
MLCM by @Minzoku (Julie Miyamoto)

Machine of Death flash fiction—I have some more refined ideas in the works, but this one was telling me to do it for some reason =p [it was gonna just be a Twitter thing, but I couldn’t reduce it to 140 characters that easily]

Passes the Bechdel test somewhat clunkily, for no particular reason.

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Rating:
Teen (O)
Class:
Rough / Concept
Submitted:
11y106d ago
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