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würdelos
würdelos by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (German) wuerdelos in deinem wahn
geknebelt von deiner gier
eingekerkert in die wellen
der losen tollheit
spielst du den akt der treulosigkeit
das spiel vom trieb
der dich regiert

die kratzer in deinem stein
verreiben sich mit sand
schmutzige fahnen deiner schamlosigkeit
gesäumte zeugnisse deiner unzucht
narben die dich entlarven
kerben deiner oberfläche
du kannst sie nicht verbergen Artwork © Copyright 2002 Akiva Papa

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