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Maud Kenelm
Maud Kenelm by @ehrehatt (Ehren Hatten)

She's cute, she's very nice, and she can be something of a pushover, though that isn't to say she hasn't had her moments of womanly clarity.

She lives near Cadbury castle and she and her best friend go there every now and then to play a game or to of hearts.

She gets lost in the forest next to cadbury castle and ends up in the ride of her life as she dodges Alwyn's arrows and Rain's sword. She does get a hit in, though. You'll have to read it.

Through the mists.

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take a read. Artwork © Copyright 2003 Ehren Hatten

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