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Kurumi Shinsetsu-Rei

Malik
Malik by @devilishkurumi (Kurumi Shinsetsu-Rei)

"My veins have bled to the point where they've shriveled up inside Within my chest I can feel my heart dying from being denied I'm so sorry for you, I'm so sorry my love for having lied

My shadow-land wings are taking me higher than I've gone before You have abused me, used me, thrown me out like a filthy whore Maybe that is all I am to you, but to someone else I'm so much more

My marrionette strings you gave me have been pulled much too tight Then you cut them and left me sobbing in that horrible red light But underneath that callouse skin I can see it with my second sight

You've hurt me more then life could have and I'm coming back for more I can tell that you loved me, have loved me, it's deep inside your core Your darkside wings are whole where my shadow-land ones are torn

"You said once to me, that I was nothing but a toy to you.... Is that true? I don't see that in your eyes anymore. And you've rescued me from this hell you sent me to... You must have a lot of trouble throwing old toys away."

Malik, and Malik's Song. I love the little angst muffin, yes I doooo.... will have to do Theos soon

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21y ago
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