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Kaua Schneider

Tatiana's friendly rival

{Kauã is reading a letter while sitting in an armchair at his house. A closeup of the card is shown with the text saying:

“Dear, Kauã

I'd like you to see me and my rival Aline, who is really kind of a rival except it's a love-hate relationship, in the park. Aline and I will bring our respective families to see if we get along or not.

Signed, Tatiana”}

{Cut to a scene where Kauã is using his cell phone to send messages to Enzo, Marco and Adrieli}

{Cuts to a scene where Enzo, Marco and Adrieli are on the balcony with Kauã. Both 4 are carrying backpacks}

Enzo: Why did you ask us to go to the park, cousin?

Marco: Yeah, I want to know.

Adrieli: And me too.

Kauã: I was there and I read Tatiana's whatsapp post and letter, because her friendly rival is a Hatterene, and I'm taking you probably to overcome your fears, since I read on the internet that her species will kill you simply because you have strong emotions.

Enzo (Trembling and trying to be brave): I-I'll put up with it, b-cause I-I've-I've seen things-things-things-are-scary-of-the-as .

Marco (A little afraid): I think I'm over it.

Adrieli: That's right, what could be really bad?

Kauã: So let's do it.

{Cut to a scene where Kauã, Enzo, Marco and Adrieli are at the entrance to the park}

Kauã: We're here, children.

Enzo, Marco and Adrieli (Enthusiastic): WOW! THE PARK IS COOLER THAN WE OURSELVES IMAGINE!

Kauã: That's right, kids, we shouldn't waste time, let's go!

{Cuts to a scene where Tatiana, Alice and their families are sitting on a bench for each family}

Marcelo: And so while Greg and I were hammering Digletts, you two were hammering each other.

Greg: That was pretty cool, Marcelo. I always saw you as one of the only people I didn't play pranks on growing up. I always thought you were special.

Marcelo: Yes, but the rivalry between the two became more friendly with the birth of our children.

{Suddenly, Kauã, Enzo, Marco and Adrieli appear out of nowhere}

Kauã: Tatiana? Alice? Did I arrive at the right place?

Enzo: That Hatterene's husband is scarier than I thought.

Marco: I think her husband, it makes sense Enzo. It is a Grimmsnarl, Hatterene's male counterpart.

Adrieli: I already visited Alice for a while. She sometimes tried to kill me, but she's really fun.

{The 2 families start to notice, Enzo, Kauã, Marco and Adrieli}

Tatiana: Kauã, I was expecting you, but you seem to have also brought Enzo, Marco and Fennekin along with you.

Alice: Friend, it's Adrieli, she's more fun than I thought. Also, so this is the Kauã you were talking about? And it looks like he came with some little friends.

Kauã: Yes, but I have many questions for both of you. Their husbands and children can intervene in these questions if they have anything else to add.

Enzo: Kauã, is it like this Alice's husband is going to eat me all up after putting me in the oven?

Greg: Oh, you naive little one, I would never do that to you just because I'm a Grimmsnarl. (Change of tone to scary) Unless you deserve it!

{Marcelo slaps Greg}

Marcelo: Greg, stop making a reason for your wife to kill this Popplio.

Greg: Sorry, Marcelo, you know he thinks I would eat him after sticking him in the oven.

Kauã: I approve of Greg's explanation, Enzo. What you said is just meaningless nonsense.

Enzo: OK, Kau.

Kauã: Alice, what are your children's names?

{As Alice speaks the names of her children, the scenes cut to show the children, who are, respectively, a Morgrem, a Hattrem, an Impidimp and a Hatenna}

Alice: Well, Kauã, these are Bob, Clara, Mateus and Mariane. Do you remember all of them?

Kauã: Of course.

Enzo: More or less.

Mark: I don't know.

Adrieli: I already know their names. Both are pretty fun in their own ways.

Kauã: Yes, I agree with what Adrieli said.

Alice and Greg: And so are we!

Tatiana: Guys, do you know what day it is?

Everyone but Tatiana: What?

Tatiana: It's men's day!

{End}

Tatiana's friendly rival by @MrDrizzile (Kaua Schneider)

Basically, we meet my family of OCs: Greg the Grimmsnarl, Aline the Hatterene, Bob the Morgrem, Clara the Hattrem, Mateus the Impidimp and Mariane the Hattrem.

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