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Eric Aponte

College Baqttle Action: Tough Breaker
College Baqttle Action: Tough Breaker by @MayorAponte (Eric Aponte)

New year, new start. Let's actually get to uploading some shit on here, eh? Allow me to introduce to you lot one of my two story concepts. The title of the post says it all really. A shounen battle story for the College aged youth of today: TOUGH BREAKER.


In a world of fighting game and battle comic logic, where a supernatural fighting energy is an everyday occurrence, two life long friends are finally ready for the next step in their lives.Tiago Tirado, a Nuyorican street fighter with a heart (and fists) of gold, and Casey 'Kidd Clown' Robinson-Bello, a shapeshifting mimic Circus Clown and Tiago's best friend since the playpen. After enjoying their gap year following high school, the duo are finally ready to take on college education at Funaki University!

But college ain't no cake walk! If the studies and grind that lie ahead of them aren't hard enough, they'll have to contend with swordsmen, karate buffs, wannabe street toughs, crypto-zoologists, pro wrestlers in training and that's just some of the Freshman class!

Others might buckle at the challenge ahead, but through their own determination, and with help from friends along the way, they'll make the grade, kick ass and see Tiago keep his promise to his father! Come hell or high water, nothing's gonna stop this Tough Breaker!


Brilliant, isn't it? A Battle Shounen in College! I scare myself with how brilliant I can be! But yeah, it's nothing truly revolutionary, but I believe in the story so much. And I can't wait to share some of the finer details with you lot! Which will probably be a while since I kinda keep forgetting about this place, but if you want to be up to date on the lore as it stands, I just so happen to have a Carrd page with everything you'll want to know!

https://toughbreaker.carrd.co/

See ya when I post next.

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