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Page TWO!
Page TWO! by @dyani (Carli Joy)

Page two of my freakish Trigun doujinshi. :P In the tradition of, um... last time, here's a script thingy of the page.

Panel 1: Vash: Oh yeah, almost forgot... I brought you something! Meryl: Uh oh.

Panel 2: Meryl: A flower? Vash: It's a little wilted... it's been in my pocket awhile... sweatdrop Note: Dunno which is worse, the hand or the flower...

Panel 3: Meryl: MENTALLY Why thank you Vash-san! (birds sing and little hearts and flowers dance about) Note: This creeps me out.

Panel 4: Meryl: BUT REALLY Wilted... yeah, so I see... thanks anyway.

Panel 5: Vash: dramatic glare

Panel 6: Vash: Now let's eat! stomach grumbles

Panel 7: Meryl: Thanks, you're so thoughtful. Help yourself.

Panel 8: Vash: I'd be glad to make you something if you'd like.

Panel 9: Meryl: Well, if you don't mind... Vash: Of course not! Meryl: I just don't want to be a burden... Vash: Too late for that, isn't it? Meryl: What?! Vash: sweatdrop I said your kitchen is nice!!!

Panel 10:

Panel 11: timer rings

Panel 12: Vash: IT IS DONE! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Carli Joy

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