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Akiva Papa

Oh Romeo
Oh Romeo by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Oh Romeo
Des Schicksals Wink hat uns bestimmt
So sind wir denn auf ewiglich gefesselt
Ach nein! Was sag ich nur?
Gefesselt!
Welch töricht Wort
Es klingt
als wären wir gefangen
und könnten niemals wieder
uns befrein
Und doch - dann wieder Ja!
Ich fühle mich gefangen
und bin es gern und möchte
nie mehr anders leben
Denn was bedeutet Freiheit noch
wenn Freiheit hieße
ohne dich zu sein

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Akiva Papa

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