@Lucky_Ladybug66
Daisy Hunt

To bathe in water so pure
To bathe in water so pure by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

I joined the new Livejournal community 20_heartbeats, and theme #8 is "Holy [to bathe in water so pure]". It immediately gave me a short fic plunnie where Seph does exactly that. It's a pool supposed to heal one's afflictions and grant tranquility, so he goes there not really believing that much that it will work, and yet kinda hoping that it will and that his wing can be healed. A year after the dragon's attack, it still isn't back to its full strength. He is given tranquility, but his wing is not healed. He decides that some things can't ever be altered and that's the lesson he's supposed to learn.

I'm thinking that the pool will only correct what the person actually needs to have done. He really needed the inner peace, but perhaps his wing was not healed because in the end he will benefit more from having it the way it is.

The scars on his chest have faded more, hence why they're whitish while the ones on his side are darker.

I cupped my hands and used myself as a model for his hands. XD I was afraid they'd give me a lot of trouble, but strangely, for once they turned out quite well.

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