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Akiva Papa

Die Trauer singt ...
Die Trauer singt ... by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (German)
Die Trauer singt und Zieht die Bahn Ihr Griff ist sanft
Und unerbittlich Die schwarze Schneise
Ihres Lieds Begleitet mich und ist Mein immerwährender Gesang

Der Strom des Klangs Trägt zart und weich Und unbeirrt Und unaufhörlich Mein bisschen Ich Und schmilzt es ein Und lächelt mich
Ins Nichts

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