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Over the stars...
Over the stars... by @littjyou (Little Jyouii-kun)
STORY: YD, mentally unstable at this time, is often visited by a "guardian angel", or so she says. She tells him things. Things he doesn't want to hear, but he does. His mind becomes corrupted, with thoughts to kill himself in dire times. He tries, and stops himself every time, but he always seems to succumb to her great beauty, and his lust gets the best of him. She tells him he wants him to be with her, in Heaven, "over the stars" (Yeah, it's an overused line, and was ripped right from Nny, forgive me and shut up). He will always be pulled in by his lust for her, but will he actually go with her is a question quite often asked.
Artwork © Copyright 2002 Little Jyouii-kun
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