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Jaklynn Combs

I hate life
I hate life by @jaklcomb (Jaklynn Combs)

I hate life...what is love? No such thing...He lied to me, said it was the distance...but it was another girl. He gave me false hopes and left me to crumble...my poem, "See what agonizing pain your stupidity has provoked? My seared soul festers with the torment you unleashed. The misrepresentation of your intamacy has eluded me for so long, but I have witnessed the candid intentions you had in mind. To love me, and abandon me...not innocently, as you vowed, but for another...I acertained your evil, immoral scheme before you could exterminate my happiness, and yet you still did...you murdered the sanguine optimist in me. I am but a prolatariat of ecstacy, laboring for no reward, but desolate tears that shall flow, cascading sorrowfully down my cheeks, for all eternity. The throbbing of my moribund ©rand pierces my exasperated soul, screaming obscenities at the malevolence of the ludicrous love I still obtain for you. Undying. Unconditional. Forever. You robbed me of my innocence."(c) me "Silly me...thinking you could ever fall in love with someone like me." -Christian, Moulin Rouge

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