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Not Like The Other Girls No.4
Not Like The Other Girls No.4 by @AF (Aliet Faslami)

"Not Like The Other Girls"

No more blame I am destined to keep you sane Gotta rescue the flame Gotta rescue the flame in your heart

No more blood, I will be there for you my love I will stand by your side The world has forsaken my girl

I should have seen it would be this way I should have known from the start what she's up to When you have loved and you've lost someone You know what it feels like to lose

She's fading away Away from this world Drifting like a feather She's not like the other girls She lives in the clouds She talks to the birds Hopeless little one She's not like the other girls I know

No more shame, she has felt too much pain, in her life In her mind she's repeating the words All the love you put out will return to you

--The Rasmus

Tadaaaaaa! Basty! Otherwise known as "Cara Black" u.u Alpha werekitty and yeah. I might redo this one 6.6 I'm not happy with it at ALL.

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