Iron Comet
Iron Comet by @Eternity9

Iron Comet

Name: Iron Comet

Gender: Female

Type: Dragon/Electric

Ability: Quark Drive

Iron Comet, mentioned in a paranormal magazine the writer had claimed to have encountered a robotic Latias sent from the future to save the past.

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Iron Comet unlike my other Future Paradox Pokemon I have more of a story idea with them.

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Iron Comet, from a future were the world was slowly being roboticized, a resistance group formed to protect the last of the free world and Iron Comet and her brother Latios were apart of that resistance, though back then she was just a normal Latias.

The resistance discovered odd space time rifts that either took you to strange worlds of random places back in the past.

So with this information they searched to find one to send the Eon Dragon duo, as the two were considered the most capable with their abilities and surely they would be able to save the future with their powers.

And after much searching, far and wide, they did succeed in finding the right rift, so quickly the resistant sent the message to Latios and Latias to go their and save the future!

But on their way to the destination the duo were caught in a giant electric web made by a roboticized spider Pokemon the two were quickly brought to the Evil Mastermind, the one roboticizing the world.

This Mastermind was very gleeful at finally having captured them and was looking forward to using their power to crush the resistance.

So sent them to the machine that turns Pokemon into robots.

As the two struggled against the pain of roboticization, Latios managed to break free of the electric webs and started to do the same for Latias but he was getting weaker from the forced transformation happening to him so with what little control of himself he had left he managed to break the machine and shove his sister out before fainting from the pain.

Latias now Iron Comet as despite her brother best attempts to save her she was now 95% robotic, but she was still in control of herself.

She tried to save her brother, but when she went to him it was already too late, he had been fully roboticized and tried attacking her, forcing her to retreat.

So Iron comet flew doing the best to dodge attacks and fly around enemies as she tried to escape the enemy base. As she near the exit a Shiny Iron Pika managed to jump down from some scaffolding and land on her back zapping her and trying to stop her escape.

Iron Comet flew out of the base with her annoying passenger doing her best to shake it off but as she tried to flee a space time rift open up right in front of her! Before Iron Comet could do anything the Iron Pika manage to her, stun her with an electrical attack and thus she unable to move fell into the portal along with Iron Pika sending them to an unknown time and place.

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Other notes

Something about portal they fell through seemed to effected the Shiny Iron Pika as 'He' is no longer under the control of the mastermind and is happy to help Iron Comet on the mission to save their 'world'

The 'scarf' Comet wears around her neck was given to her by Latios.

Currently I imagine two 'stories' for Iron Comet, one where the rift transported her to a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon World while the other she did arrive to the past, but her memories are very hazy on 'how' she's suppose to save the world, and thus is trying to remember what key part in history she needs to change to make sure her world doesn't happen.

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Also yes this fakemon is inspired/based in this airplane plushie

https://64.media.tumblr.com/cde61a0037daffacdaf6165e91a877ea/557b78b06da475d1-bf/s500x750/e5d0c91d6c46f4d7830035ce29cb9f0852e47070.jpg

Photo from bestthriftfinds tumblr post https://bestthriftfinds.tumblr.com/post/730416726662135808

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