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Evelyne McCauley

Robyn helping Kai
Robyn helping Kai by @evelmcca (Evelyne McCauley)

Another scene(that I haven't written yet!!) from the fanfic I'm writting.After the World Leader Beyblading Tournament,Kai walks on a mountain highway,the he spots Robyn standing and leaning against the post-thingie,thinking at looking at her Beyblade.Kai walks up to her to talk with her,but three persons in cloaks(coughcoughSerenade,Tim and Doug!coughcough)makes Robyn drop her Beyblade down the mountain trail and she goes after it,then Kai follows.Kai finds Robyn's blade,but then the "three misterious cloaked people"coughcoughcreate a landslide,wich hits Kai and Robyn,and injures Kai the most.Kai gives Robyn back her blade and Robyn calls for help.Wee...that was long ^^;;;;;

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