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Julie Miyamoto

Back to Square One Page #022
Back to Square One Page #022 by @Minzoku (Julie Miyamoto)

I want to say the art shifts are intentional and denote a major event, but... to be honest, it's laziness =p [sorry, I have sooooooo many things I'm trying to get done at once, and I just can't justify spending this long on this comic anymore, as much as I otherwise want to draw forever]

Trivia: Two pages ago, when Stormy mentions "Miss" Astraea, I had neglected to consult the book, where Astraea is referred to as Madame. Technically they're both correct in a NOT AT ALL RETCONNED way--Madame is the proper way to refer to a frank* teacher, but she is also young and not married [and a little immature from her last line + yelling at the cheaters [in case that wasn't clear]].

*They aren't speaking French; I was just too lazy to invent FOUR completely new languages.

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