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Posted: 14 May 2010, 10:22 PM
Hello all :]

I'm trying to work on a pic that I would like to make a small poster...so I really don't want any flaws.

Can I get some feedback, please? I tried redlining my own work on what I had problems with, but I wouldn't mind a redline over my redline...hehe...

Thank you for reading ♥

http://tinypic.com/r/ip06x2/5
Posted: 16 May 2010, 10:39 AM
Cute picture, the interaction in the poses is nicely portrayed. It already looks pretty good as it is to me. The only things I really noticed are the belly button on the guy in front is a bit too high - it should be at the natural waist level, and his jeans look like they're resting only slightly lower - and the guy in the back's head is a little lopsided on the top, though it looks like that's just because it's a preliminary sketch. I would also bring the line of the guy in front's neck out a little at the right; as it is, the curve makes it look like the neck goes in a little too far. Connecting that line to the bottom of the ear should resolve that.

Very nicely drawn, though. I'm interested to see how this is going to come together.
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