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Orbit Ocelot Concepts
Orbit Ocelot Concepts by @Treager (Lunari Natsume)

For a short time I worked for Antarctic Press, specifically Shon Howell. He had me doing some stuff for a comic he came up with called "Orbit Ocelot". These are my first ideas on what she might look like! Which one do you like? Artwork © Copyright 2002 Jace Forste

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Posted: Sunday, 28 April, 2002 @ 03:22 PM

Go with the orange hair, it fits her fur color better. Overall, they look great! Except... too skinny at the waist. NO human-esque creature should be that tiny!! X.X sorry, I just have a thing against corsets and disproportionate waists... ^^;

But still, I like the poses. side7.com/art/courdavi

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