@MrDrizzile
Kaua Schneider

Enzo and Marco's New Friends

{Kauã is in what appears to be his house, with a green and white layout, sitting on a light dark brown sofa, and using his cell phone.}

{Cuts to Kauã checking his whatsapp where he is writing to Enzo. The chat proceeds as:

Enzo: Can you visit my new friends house? I went with Marco to their house. I will show you their picture.}

{Picture is posted to the chat, consisting of a Cinderace, a Lopunny, a Raboot, a Buneary and a Scorbunny, with Enzo's caption saying: Here they are: Carlos, Lara, Jorge, Helena and Thiago.}

{Kauã replies with: I'm going for it, but let me post this on Renan and Natália, his friend, Whatsapp, to see if they know this family.}

{Cuts to a scene where Renan arrives by car to take Kauã to the aforementioned family home}

Renan: Kau, I only know them because I deliver for them, the most recent being the Nintendo Switch at the behest of their eldest son.

Kauã: Okay, but can you take me to them if you remember them and where they live?

{Cuts to a scene where Renan's car arrives at the aforementioned family's house}

Kauã: Thank you Renan for taking me to their house.

Renan: You're welcome

{Renan leaves the scene by car}

{Kauã knocks gently on the door of the family home}

{The door opens and Carlos, the Cinderace who is probably the father of the family appears}

Carlos: Hey man, you're not the Kauã that our new guests Enzo and Marco were mentioning before.

Kauã: Yes, it's me.

Carlos: You look smaller than I had expected.

Kauã: I only look bigger for 2 reasons: I'm bigger than a normal Drizzile, but the difference is a little hard to see and my size difference with Enzo and Marcos.

Carlos: Okay, I'll introduce you to my family.

Kauã: No need, I already know their names because Enzo posted them to me on Whatsapp. I just want to interact with them.

Carlos: Okay, you can come in.

{Kauã and Carlos enter the latter's house, where Lara, Carlos' wife is on the couch watching Esponja Bob with Thiago, the youngest son of the family.}

Thiago: HOW DO THEY GET A FIRE UNDER WATER? LIKE? LIKE?

Lara: Calm down. This is a drawing where normal physics doesn't happen. You could touch my fluffy ears to calm down and forget about this memory.

{The scene zooms in to focus on Thiago touching his mother's ears.}

Thiago: You're right, mom. You have.

{Carlos arrives on the scene with Kauã}

Carlos: Honey, we have a new guest: Kauã. No need to introduce him to ourselves as he said he knows our whatsapp names. (Laughing)

{Lara leaves the couch to hug Kauã}

Lara: Hello, Kauã.

Kauã: (with a slightly lighter tone as if he were bored) Hi, Lara.

Lara: Kauã, are you okay?

Kauã: Yes, I'm fine.

Lara: I thought you had blood dripping from your nose because of the way I look.

Kauã: Thank you, I just want to meet your children.

Lara: OK, I'll call them for you.

Lara: JORGE, HELENA AND THIAGO, COME IN BECAUSE KAUÃ HAS ARRIVED.

{Jorge, Helena and Thiago appear on the scene}

Jorge: Holy shit, mom, I was already completing week 7 of Friday Night Funkin and you made me pause just because of a guest.

Helena: That's right mom, I was already trying to watch all the episodes of Thomas. No need to exaggerate the scream, mom.

Thiago: I was just in the bathroom!

Lara: Sorry, darlings. I just wanted to show you Kauã.

Kauã: Hello, Jorge, Hello, Helena and Hello, Thiago. {As Kauã speaks, scenes cut to show the characters Kauã is greeting.}

Jorge, Helena and Thiago: (All Together): Hello Kauã.

Carlos: You see kids, Kauã is really cool. Kauã, can you talk a little about yourself?

Kauã: I'm very smart and smart, I have autism, I really like to stay on the computer, tablet and cell phone and I also like to dance and listen to music.

Carlos: Wow, Kauã, can you listen to some remixes of some game songs that I made myself?

Lara: Can you hear my song covers with my voice too?

Jorge: I have some memes to show you.

Helena: I also have some drawings to show you.

Thiago: Can I ask you for help with my drawings? I don't know how to draw a star.

Kauã: Calm down, one at a time. Speaking of which, where is Enzo and Marco?

{Enzo and Marco appear walking through the door and sliding a robot vacuum cleaner with 2 bottles of soda for speed}

Enzo (Screaming): MARCO, WHAT IS THIS IDEA? YOU'RE OUT OF YOUR HEAD, YOU LITTLE CHAMELEON WHO THINKS ABOUT BAD IDEAS.

Marco: Calm down, Enzo, I just wanted people to have fun. Besides, this was all Jorge's idea just because he thought he could make this vacuum-riding thing better by disabling the vacuum to set the soda bottles up like rockets.

Enzo (Continues yelling): BUT IT'S EVEN YOUR FAULT, YOU MADE THE VACUUM CLEANER HIT THE WALLS OUTSIDE THE HOUSE AND NOW WE'RE GOING TO COLLIDE IN THE HALLWAY.

{Therefore, Enzo and Marco crash into the hallway wall causing them to become dizzy with their eyes spiraling}

Marco: That was really cool and I don't think where my tail is.

Enzo: I don't feel my ass.

{Kauã, Carlos, Lara, Jorge, Helena and Thiago walk down the hall.}

Carlos (Furious): ENZO, MARCO AND JORGE, YOU GO TO MY REMIX OFFICE, WHICH IS ALSO WHERE MY WIFE MAKES HER COVERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

{Carlos uses his right arm to pull and hold Jorge by the ears and uses his left arm to carry Enzo and Marco}

Lara: Honey, wait! That was very cruel to them.

Carlos (Continues Furious): SHUT UP! I DON'T WANT TO DO ANYTHING CRUEL TO THEM I JUST WANT TO DISCIPLINE THEM!

{Cut to a scene where Enzo, Marco and Jorge are sitting on the office floor, with Carlos standing and calmer.}

Carlos: And that's it kids, don't try to do something like that or I'll have to use my Fireball on you 3.

Enzo, Marco and Jorge (All Together): OK, We are excused.

{Cut to a scene where Carlos, Lara, Enzo, Marco and Jorge are in the room}

Lara: Dear, Sorry for overestimating your total power.

Carlos: Thank you, I was always able to help them not to do something like that in the future.

{Carlos and Lara start kissing each other and Enzo and Marco leave the scene}

Jorge: Speaking of which, where is Kauã?

{Carlos and Lara stop kissing}

Lara: In bed.

{Cuts to a scene where Kauã is in the fetal position on the bed in her parents' room}

Jorge: Kauã, wake up, it's all over.

Kauã (Waking up): Huh, what? George? So Carlos is not furious?

Jorge: No, dad isn't mad anymore.

Kauã: After all, it was your mother's good idea to put me to bed and let me touch those cute ears.

Jorge: Yeah, after all you're a nice guy you can visit us another day.

Kauã: Yes, I will.

{END}

Enzo and Marco's New Friends by @MrDrizzile (Kaua Schneider)

The English translation of my second episode is here! All on this website!

Here, we meet my family of OCs, Carlos the Cinderace, Lara the Lopunny, Jorge the Raboot, Helena the Buneary and Thiago the Scorbunny.

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