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Umeko Yamitaro

Lightning Stripes
Lightning Stripes by @Umeko (Umeko Yamitaro)

This is a horse I drew not long ago, just a black horse ^^

I was worried I had lost my touch with drawing horses

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Posted: Sunday, 28 June, 2009 @ 04:15 PM

Very nice! Proportions are perfect and I like the arch of his neck, honestly very full of feelings and expressive

there is only one thing I would like to add, the tail starts too early in the back, I would start it at a lower part, if you divide the circle area of the butt in three, then one third from the back, or two thirds counting from the bone that looks like the ankle of a foot

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