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Haphazard
Haphazard by @devthemagister (Devon Thompson)

The cast of my continuing story "Haphazard." From left to right we have Fawriel, Dev, Tara, Nikki, and Bort (on Nikki's head). The story is coming to an end soon, so I'll get to start on something new! ^_^

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Furry / Anthropomorphic
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
21y13d ago
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Posted: Friday, 14 November, 2003 @ 10:46 PM
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Nice! ^^ Work on making the hair more flowing perhaps, if you have one, try using the smudge tool (I go wild with it sometimes) XD Nice shading and CGing technique. Perhaps you should blur and smudge up the fire and add a little yellow to it. ^^ Keep it up!

Posted: Sunday, 16 November, 2003 @ 03:22 PM
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Thanks for the comment! Actually, I colored this with markers and color pencils. It looks like I used CGing because I did use the smudge tool. ^^ I'm not very good with it yet, this was only me second try. Thanks alot, it's nice to recieve a real comment instead of the usual, "Good job!"

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