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Tapping into the Lifestream
Tapping into the Lifestream by @mariocho (Maria Ochoa)

Ok, this one definitely needs explaning!

In the long, long ago, in the before times - I made stories about Diana and Cloud. Now Cloud was still grief stricken about Aeris' death, and Diana decided to help. So she took him back to the City of the Ancient where she used her materia, the Planet Materia, to summon lifestream. Now, I made the PM a story of its own - it was the will of the planet itself. And in the comic, it unexpectedly blew up with energy, and in the last three panels, she allowed herself to be possessed by Aeris' soul OOOeeeeOOOOOooooooo Anyone confused yet? GREAT!

Cloud © Squaresoft Diana © You should know by now >.O

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Posted: Wednesday, 12 March, 2003 @ 06:51 AM

this is so kool! i wanna read that if its a fanfic! clouds face looks neat in teh second panel.

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