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Jenny Romanchuk

- Fishy Journey -
- Fishy Journey - by @Ashwings (Jenny Romanchuk)

A sloppy picture.

From left to right ithis is Pete (it's not a girl!!) ans Steve. Petes fish (who was given to him by his gf) needed it's water clean...and an entire revamp of it's bowl. It was really bad, so they took the bus and my mom and little sister helped him clean it...while Steeve ate my food.

I just though it was kinda funny seeing two teenage guys on a bus with a fishbowl...heh

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Posted: Saturday, 04 September, 2004 @ 08:00 AM

I love the stylization of this image. It is so effective, I'd never call it sloppy. The blurred shapes outside the windows really give the effect of motion and keeps the picture from becoming too static. The hair is awesome, it just suits the image so well. To really capture the feeling of being on the bus, I would have had more people crowded into the picture, but that's the only thing that could be improved. Keep up the great work.

Posted: Tuesday, 05 October, 2004 @ 06:02 PM

That background is awesome! The colors through the window are so true to life that it almost looks like a photo..well, except for the fuzzy blur factor. I really like the looseness of this though, it's very painterly. The shading on the figures in the foreground is really nice too, 'specially the shading on the fabric folds. Awesome work (as usual) ^_^

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