One thing I love about your artwork is that you know how to use color. The colors in this are amazingly well suited for each other, highlighting the good parts and minimizing the few negatives in your style.

I know nothing about the anime this is fan-based in, so I can't speak of how well it fits there. But I can say that if you were responsible for the character design on the girl, you did a wonderful job. I'd totally try to sport that if I could. :)

I do sort of wish that her extended hand was slightly bigger to give the viewer more of a sense of foreshortening, but it's only a minor gripe.

Adore the background. A lot.

Wow! Cool I love Naruto... expecially Kakashi!