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Lost hearts- Javanny (Giovani)
Lost hearts- Javanny (Giovani) by @Axenblade (Laguna Barr)

Based off a ghost story I was reading in English class. Some recluse took children in and on the 24th of March ( The start of spring, although that's now the 21st) he would perform an old Pagan ritual in which he removed the heart of the child when they were still alive, burnt it to ashes then drank it in a mixture of the ashes and red wine "perferably Port". I won't spiol the end, so If you wanna know read it for yourself... just look for ghost stories called "Lost Hearts"
Artwork © Copyright 2003 Laguna Barr

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Posted: Saturday, 29 March, 2003 @ 07:48 AM

That's pretty good Charlotte-chan, e-heh and yes people I know what the ending is, but my lips are sealed..well not literally otherwise I wouldn't be able to talk ^^; but yeah I know what the ending to the story is but you ain't gettin' nothing out of me so there, heheee like I said bud great pic! ^_^

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