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October 2nd, 2024

The Tooniverse

We see some of Trauma Jester’s fans talking to each other in an online forum that was made about the aforementioned game, the fans then bring up about Terry’s decision to draw pornography and how a woman named Mary Sue has blatantly plagiarized Trauma Jester. The forum’s moderator tells the fans that not only do they need to punish Mary for her plagiaristic ways but they also need to punish Terry for “abandoning” them when he stopped production on the game, one fan suggests that they find out more about Mary's personal life so they can punish the game designer by harming her loved ones. The Trauma Jester fans go on Mary's Birdie account and they learn that the game designer has a sister and an aunt; Mary's sister is named Lia and her aunt’s name is Lydia. It’s revealed that the world’s counterpart of Mandy is the moderator of the Trauma Jester forum and some of the fans who go on the forum are the world’s counterparts of Rage, Chase and Fearless. 

Mandy tasks Fearless and Rage with finding Lynn and Lia while Chase explains that he’s going to get his criminal uncle to help them with their villainous plans, when Rage asks Chase how his uncle can possibly help them it’s revealed that Chase’s uncle works in the black market. A disguised Fearless is driving around in his van and he ends up finding Lydia’s house, as Fearless takes a picture of the house he sees that Lydia has a pet Pikachu. As Fearless drives away he tells Mandy (through his smartphone) that he has an idea on how they can hurt Mary, a disguised Rage is walking around town and he ends up spotting Lia walking out of a convenience store. Rage starts following Lia in order to see the path that the woman takes to her home so his team can find out where she lives, as Rage stealthily follows Lia home we see that Rupert and Cassie have developed superhuman abilities. Fearless arrives at Mandy’s apartment and he shows her the pictures that he took of Lydia’s house, Chase then finishes talking to his uncle over the phone and he tells his team that they have been given discounts for some gear that they can use for their evil plans.

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