@RaptorPupil

October 3rd, 2024

The scene opens to Lydia’s house at night and Lydia has just let her Pikachu outside to enjoy the nightly breeze, as Pikachu runs around the backyard we see Chase and Fearless confront the Pokémon in rubber suits. The two villains grab Pikachu and they stuff him into a rubber bag as the Pokémon tries electrocuting them, Chase and Fearless then drive off with the captured Pikachu and Mandy tells them that she and Rage have made it to Lia’s house. At Lia’s house Mandy pulls out a camcorder and she tells Rage to beat up Lia when he drags her outside, Rage then knocks on the door as Mandy hides somewhere. Lia answers the door and Rage proceeds to pull the woman outside, as Rage beats up Lia with an iron pipe Mandy films the attack so she can put the video online. Chase and Fearless make it to Lia’s house and they show Mandy that they have captured Lydia’s Pikachu, Rage then leaves the area with his team after leaving a note next to Lia’s battered body.

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