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Deamons
Deamons by @Xalan (Xalan Sourkrat)

What demon did this?

To pry upon and innocent child, One so young and pure, What demon would do this?

She was a CHILD! She was no threat to your plans, You did have to do this! She was only a child

How could you do this? How could you do this to this child? What demon would do this? What kind of monster would take their anger out upon a mere child?

I swore to protect her I PROMISED! I swore upon my life, my sword, my honor…. I said I’d never let the monster in the dark get her…. My life is forfeit now, Because a demon destroyed this child

She cried in pain and betrayal, But she didn’t lift a finger, Not even to last to protect herself HOW COULD YOU?! HOW DARE YOU TAKE THIS CHILD’S LIFE? HOW DARE YOU SPILL HER BLOOD? HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER! HOW DARE YOU!!!!

She was only a child…. Of no threat….

What Monster, What demon, Did this?

I am that demon.

Yup, creepy. A timeline picture, and then Emperess Senile goes crazy and attempts to hunt Marran down, whom has acepted the offer to become a Dark Lord, and.....it just gets creepy. But creepy's good...right? Artwork © Copyright 2003 Xalan Sourkrat

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Posted: Tuesday, 18 February, 2003 @ 03:05 PM

gahs and drools Cool poem! Rescan though! And sent to me! Me wants to color!

Posted: Friday, 21 February, 2003 @ 01:28 AM

lotsa hugs Thank you for coloring so much of my stuff! You make it look soooooo much prettier...goes off to huggle all of the pretty pics you color I've got to do some pics in return for you coloring all of that stuff! ^_^

Posted: Thursday, 20 February, 2003 @ 11:46 PM

It's very nice!...but....Xal, are you feeling okay? Seriously...Is everything alright? I'm just worried something had upset you....

But if everything's okay..then....okay... ^^;

Sorry..It's the Jedi inside of me talking...Cause I draw stuff like that when I'm mad..it's just....ahh...forget it.

Luv ya.... :)

Posted: Friday, 21 February, 2003 @ 01:22 AM

Aww, thanks for asking. ^^ Aside from vowing I'm NEVER going to teach kids riding lessons(at least, after I go to Califorina to ride), I'm fine. (Just mostly little boys that are annoying to teach, they run around and around and around yelling and screaming and getting under the horses and scaring them half to death, and then they fall off the horses and scream that their back's broken(one actaully did that too.). Little girls are fun to teach, they're macho and tough and actually BRUSH their own horses....) ^^

But that's my little rant....This just popped up after a stressful day of working. hugs back you're so sweet for asking! ^_^

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