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Hoerst du die Stimmen, mein Liebster
Hoerst du die Stimmen, mein Liebster by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (German version) Hörst du die Stimmen, mein Liebster Sie murmeln ihr Lied über dem Meer

Die Nacht ist durchtränkt von der Weichheit ihrer Klänge Und die Luft federt sanft in ihren Schwingen

Sie trägt uns, bis ihr Singen verklingt in der blauen Wärme des Morgens Wir bleiben zurück in der Erinnerung

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