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Akiva Papa

Trauer
Trauer by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

Text (German version) Ich nehme die Erinnerung für die Wahrheit, mein Liebster Und lebe in einem Traum, den es nie gegeben hat

Meine Haut zerdehnt sich, wenn ich an dich denke und meine Worte flüstern ins Leere

Es ist nicht viel, mein Liebster, was mir von dir bleibt

Aber es ist Alles

ENGLISH VERSION There is just a vague idea, my love, I remember and take for real that makes me live in a dream not coming true My skin is bursting when I'm thinking of you My words hush whispering into a void Not much, my love, remains of you But it is everything

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