This is stunning... really quite stunning. The emotions come across really well, and I like the premise... they're both helpless.
The only thing I can possibly suggest is to work with a background... a background provides setting, which provides a context, which suggests a story. I'd like to know more about the characters... but that I care in the first place is enough to tell me that it's a fantastic piece of art. =^_^=
I'm looking forward to seeing more from you in the future!
-- Tails
This totally captures the way I feel whenever some of my friends ask me for their help on things that are just utterly beond me.... a beautiful picture :)