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David Walch

Mai Okuda New
Mai Okuda New by @Zentron (David Walch)

The newest and final design of Mai Okuda, the main female in my current Anime project.

Category:
Humanoid
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
19y341d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 26 May, 2004 @ 07:39 AM
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Wow, your anime is incredible. The lines are very smooth although the legs appear slightly too long with that short skirt, even for anime. Absolutely wonderful drawing, though.

Posted: Wednesday, 26 May, 2004 @ 07:45 AM
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Yes, I did notice, but it was too late to change it.

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Posted: Wednesday, 26 May, 2004 @ 09:45 PM
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The picture looks pretty fine... very nice, clean lines too. Though I think her face could use a bit of work in the nose and mouth area... perhaps you should edit out that one nostril. =o Still, it's a nice design.

Posted: Thursday, 27 May, 2004 @ 02:51 AM
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Ah yes, the nostril, it was a bit of a slip of the pen there, pity.

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