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Alexandra Smith

Darkness Descends (Or, The Wrath of Goth Poetry)
Darkness Descends (Or, The Wrath of Goth Poetry) by @Pheep (Alexandra Smith)

=D A random doodle done in OC to match a poem I made at a site where you put together your own stereotypical goth poetry. XD Very amusing if you ask me, check it out if you want: http://www.deadlounge.com/poetry/created.html

Anyway, some explaining might be needed here - Most of the picture is a bunch of over-literal things mocking the dark metaphors in the poem. Hime (the red 'un), for instance, is wrapped in night's "dark, suffocating cloak", while Phib (purple dude) is gazing heartbrokenly at what was once "the light for which he lusted", which was swept away by a "velvet ebon nothingness", which is what the spazzy angel in the background is picking up as she enters the picture. =D And...that's about it. Yep.

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Posted: Tuesday, 21 September, 2004 @ 10:49 AM

lmfao, I need to comment on all these pictures. But I shall start with this one because it makes Raz laugh. :O! The darkness is strangling Hime...I knew that darkness couldnt be trusted! Stupid Phib2 killing the flame. :( It was all the angels screaming. I love Hime espiecially, with that night cloak...ohoho... ...I am not capable of a more intelligent comment. <3

Posted: Thursday, 23 September, 2004 @ 01:47 PM

Aw, but it isn't Phib2's fault that the flame died ;; its the velvet ebon nothingness! Phibsy was just gazing at it lustfully. :O But oh, poor Hime. "STRANGLED BY CLOAK" isnt a very flattering obituary header...Ehe n_n Thanks for commenting, too!

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