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V. E. Lehkonen

ROL: Lunai
ROL: Lunai by @veltzeh (V. E. Lehkonen)

2005/06/19

Lunai, a character of a fellow role-player. It was a gift of sorts.

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Posted: Friday, 22 July, 2005 @ 07:42 AM

Wow. The wings are so pretty. The feathers look really realistic, as if one could reach out and touch them. I have a mini-obsession with wings, so when I saw this as the most recent upload, I had to come look.

studies picture. I really don't see anything to give constructive criticism on. XD; It looks beautiful. I especially enjoy the lighting in the hair and the folds of the clothes. And the hands ... wow, you must be an expert on hands. The bow in the left hand was a fitting prop.

Posted: Friday, 22 July, 2005 @ 07:52 AM
Thank you : ) I really did try to make the wings look as good as I could with them being nearly black and all, great to hear that it worked! It seems I forgot it, but here's the original ink version that has some detail that was lost while coloring.
Heh, hands have come with lots of practice ;)

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