@ethrodin
Jessica Lauren Ouellette

Maiden
Maiden by @ethrodin (Jessica Lauren Ouellette)

This is a character in one of my fantasy series. She is a forlorn maiden who has discovered her love has perished during battle with a dragon.

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16y186d ago
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Posted: Monday, 03 December, 2007 @ 07:03 PM

Very nice work on the outfit, you've portrayed a very Medieval maiden quite well. The shading is nicely done, especially on the cloth over her shoulder. Her head looks a little big, and I'm not sure what she's doing with her right hand, but your fundamentals are excellent. The face looks very realistic. Adding eyebrows would help even up the forehead area a little.

Posted: Thursday, 20 March, 2008 @ 11:37 PM

Thanx! Eyebrows were either shaved or covered with make-up in the time I place her to be in (rennaissance.) This form of action would result in larger-looking forheads, unless you mean her entire head, lol! Her hand is meant to be clutching at her heart, (other resting on a garden statue, but that's yet to be drawn.)

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