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Bring it on baka...
Bring it on baka... by @Reb (Robz C)

^_^; Most people who know Kiey would run now. She actually -enjoys- fighting. No. She LOVES fighting, and showing how powerfull and deadly the SaiyaJin race can be.

Powered up, the hair forms those golden spikes. And I like the way her tail came out here. Also, I love her eyes. ^_^! I finaly got them right! She's dressed in her training Gi, and not the SaiyaJin battle armour. I mean, come on. She can fight and look good in anything! XD

...er, did I mention RUN?!?!

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Posted: Thursday, 08 January, 2004 @ 10:22 PM

She is hot. o.O I really like how you've captured a quality about her--she looks mad, and ready to fight, but also has a seductive quality about her--perhaps because she's untouchable. So she has a confident aura, which is always attractive.

The pose is really cool--I love the hands. Her expression definetly looks like she's ready to fight--gods, I know that feeling! I love fighting, too. The way her hips seem to be swaying, like she's sauntering towards a victimb, is truly awesome. Great hair, too!

Her facial proportions are a tad off, but that's all I can really critique on. These can be fixed by stretching light guidelines across the face to keep the eyes even, and the nose in the center. Also, I'd like to see cleaner lineart from you--using a fresh piece of paper and tracing down or up (email me if you don't know what these are!) and using pen to ink really gets good lineart. Since you said this is a rough drawing, I'll be hoping you intend to finish it. :) I'll look forward to it!

Posted: Friday, 20 February, 2004 @ 11:39 AM

Thanks for the comment! ^.^; I think you have described the scene/quality better than I could have here, lol.

I know I should have used face guidlines a little more than I did. Thanks for the tip too. See, I did origionally, but kept editing the picture so much by erasing and re-drawing certain parts, that I think I lost whatever guidlines there were to begin with, lol.

And I'll try to get my lineart a bit more cleaner for ya, lol. I'm just a bit lazy sometimes I guess. And I -am- going to finnish it. Either, by shading it in or adding colour. Don't know yet.

Thanks! ^_^

Posted: Saturday, 10 January, 2004 @ 02:11 AM

o.o; hides Jeeeze.. I gots one thing to say: Good thing ran into Sari rather then Kiey! XD

She looks -so- awesome in this one O_o; You can -tell- she could kick your ass ^^; And yet at the same time she looks like she could be as gentle as a kitten..

Awesome image all together! ^^

Posted: Friday, 20 February, 2004 @ 11:44 AM

Drags her out of the closet where she's hiding, wondering if the church guy's in there? XD

Thankies! And don't worry. ^_^ Next time I'll make sure you get more of a chance to run into Kiey >=D

blinks Huh? You can -tell- she could kick your ass? Come on! You -know- she could kick your ass! XD

^_^ Thanks for the comment!

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