Thanks for the comment! ^.^; I think you have described the scene/quality better than I could have here, lol.
I know I should have used face guidlines a little more than I did. Thanks for the tip too. See, I did origionally, but kept editing the picture so much by erasing and re-drawing certain parts, that I think I lost whatever guidlines there were to begin with, lol.
And I'll try to get my lineart a bit more cleaner for ya, lol. I'm just a bit lazy sometimes I guess. And I -am- going to finnish it. Either, by shading it in or adding colour. Don't know yet.
Thanks! ^_^
She is hot. o.O I really like how you've captured a quality about her--she looks mad, and ready to fight, but also has a seductive quality about her--perhaps because she's untouchable. So she has a confident aura, which is always attractive.
The pose is really cool--I love the hands. Her expression definetly looks like she's ready to fight--gods, I know that feeling! I love fighting, too. The way her hips seem to be swaying, like she's sauntering towards a victimb, is truly awesome. Great hair, too!
Her facial proportions are a tad off, but that's all I can really critique on. These can be fixed by stretching light guidelines across the face to keep the eyes even, and the nose in the center. Also, I'd like to see cleaner lineart from you--using a fresh piece of paper and tracing down or up (email me if you don't know what these are!) and using pen to ink really gets good lineart. Since you said this is a rough drawing, I'll be hoping you intend to finish it. :) I'll look forward to it!