@angelblood
Alice Ghost

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Teen (V)
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20y361d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 24 December, 2003 @ 12:43 PM

I can't beleive no one commented on this yet, this is a great picture! The shading is very well done and it's very expressive, i love how you dipicted emotions here. I agree that his face turned out a little better then hers, but it's still good. Considering that this is almost entirely a black and white picture, you did a very good job on expressions though, and the little bit of red blood stands out nicely. I guess this picture can be depressing, but there is something in it deeper then just depression. His eyes look sorrowful, as if she was his old friend, or even lover, but at the same time, there seems like a sense of distance between them, as if he feels for her, hurting for her, but is not heartbroken because of it himself. Very nicely done. Is it just me, or do her shoulders look a little too small?

Posted: Friday, 02 January, 2004 @ 06:00 PM

Thanks for the comment! Hm... I was trying to make a sort of chiaro oscuro (How the fuck is that spelled?) effect, but I guess it does shrink the shoulders. I'll try to fix that, thanks. :)

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